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Love/Hate
Far away in the lands of old there existed an unspoken code,
A code of honour, of trust, of confidence, of respect.
Nowadays in the lands of near there exists no such road,
No road of faith, of integrity, no vision of what's correct.
Who will save the unwitting scapegoats now persecuted by the past,
Misunderstood targets of wrath from those who are most greatly scorned.
But the blind injustice, oh misdirected arrow, here is unsurpassed,
For the loss of gallantry, for the loss of chivalry, for many a day we have mourned.
Yet it seems now, in this age, a revival is out of date,
For who could care for this system old now so out of place?
You accuse us wrongly, oh wretched ones, you beings so full of hate,
Why must you neglect our innermost feelings, our truest nature vile desecrate.
Desanctified essences, you belong not in this realm.
Return to your abyss, lest our hearts you shall overwhelm.
Till next time, may you agglomerate all your unpremeditated contemplations.
6 years ago
3 comments:
seeing as you just wrote that in about 15 minutes, wow much??
but even if you did spend much longer, still wow :P
once again there's not much to say but, nice work eric ;P
How can you writing something like this in 15 minutes? If you handed this in for some poetry assignment, there'd be full marks easy! :S
Are you going to enter anything you write in any competitions? Maybe the New Enigma?
Nice work! =)
i like this one better and its a sonnet right? supposed to be in iambic right...but yes good work, nice imagery and all the works! =)
Steph
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